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Tenshi no Yami

🎶Where in the world is Carmen Sandiego🎶

Jokes aside, I love the catty banter. Theyre both way too prideful to let the other one cut them down and I'm here for it!
Thank you for more insight on Ladnavia. I'll take a note out of Gideon's book by saying she aint a nice lady!
She a little heavy on that 🍷though. Slow down girl lol

I do LOVE the challenge though. Theyre both underhanded and I look forward to their interactions.

New location sounds posh and super fancy too.

Lovely post as usual, Ciro

5 years agoReply

thanks, Tenshi, I'm glad you liked it! 😄Yes, I had a lot of fun writing that first scene. Saw how Cordis treated Senshi and I wanted Navi to be like "I'm not putting up with this." lolYeah, when I pictured them as "allies for now," but it most likely will end in someone's back being stabbed 🔪I felt like filling in some details from Van and Navi's past. Some of it was already mentioned by Van to Nu in the kiss chapter, but now Cordis would know about his history, too. (a little more than Nu as well).She does love that wine. Probably because it's red, too ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ I thought it'd be funny for Cordis to start eating the picnic dinner with Navi 😄

5 years agoReply

@Ciro, love the chapter and can't wait to but in Shadow. ^.^

5 years agoReply

@FionaDaydreamer, thanks Fiona 😀 Id love to see how Shadow plays in! 😎

5 years agoReply

Tenshi no Yami

@FionaDaydreamer, i kinda wanna see Shadow mess with Caecius seeing how you he likes to hurt people's feelings
Make him suffer!!! (I mean that in the nicest way possible....😈)

5 years agoReply

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