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Omega-3(秋雁)
@晨星．死神
4 months agoReply
晨星．死神
謝謝你的評文！
我沒注意到使用了兩次尷尬😅改天來重修
有個問題想問一下……關於「聽見腳步聲」那裡
主角是女生應該知道（？
那一幕的場景是：
主角看見絡悅（男主）站在房子對面，走近的聲音引起他抬頭（抬頭的不是希玲，希玲幾分鐘前和主角分開了）
不曉得有沒有誤解你的意思🥲

總之，很喜歡你的評論，第一次參加書評收到這樣的建議很開心！
4 months agoReply
Omega-3(秋雁)
@晨星．死神,嗯嗯，我的意思是主角不應該知道絡悅聽見了甚麼
4 months agoReply
晨星．死神
@Omega-3(秋雁),噢,有道理耶……
改天真的要來重新挑一下錯字和語病
謝謝你！
4 months agoReply
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