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玉行
9/3/2024 修改

1.新增攻略對象的劇情，補充真相
2.為了讓本章的內容更集中，現實部份挪到下章
2 years agoReply
阿掌
相當雷厲風行呢！
2 years agoReply
玉行
@阿掌,忍不了，連忙放下作業，先搞這個🥹
2 years agoReply
阿掌
@玉行,效果拔群！
2 years agoReply
玉行
@阿掌,非常感謝！！
2 years agoReply
阿掌
咦，感覺略倉促（？
2 years agoReply
玉行
嗯......🤔本來定下的結局就是這樣🤔之後會抽時間再細修🙏🏻
是因為好感一下子就滿了的關係嗎？
2 years agoReply
阿掌
@玉行,一來是這章好像比較短？我記得我還沒回過神來就看完了。二來是這個藏了一整關的攻略對象，戲份著實少了些，咻地就沒了，有一種被鋪陳了好多個禮拜的好奇心突然就落空的感覺。三來是推論過關方法的地方，似乎可以再詳細些？或者應該說自然生動一點？朱秀峰給人智將的形象，不過他的推理過程有點不嚴謹。

大概是這樣！
2 years agoReply
玉行
@阿掌,大感謝，給我指了條明路🙏🏻🙏🏻我得再仔細想想怎麼處理會更好🫠

智將www
2 years agoReply
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