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嵐靈
因為未看過原著，所以有一堆問號~😔😔
5 years agoReply
毛鼠之之
沒關係XD這篇我給太多謎題了，之後盡量不要這麼多問號囉QQ
5 years agoReply
毛鼠之之
默默的把自家小孩拿出來寫，還寫得太長了。。希望大家別介意><
5 years agoReply
琉璃異色貓
怎會介意呢？我之前也寫了個番外篇🤭 不過因為是番外，要先假設讀者沒看過原本那故事，所以設定可能要粗略交代一下。單看這篇的話，只知道吉維安很強大，但不太清楚他到底有甚麼能力或身份地位。為何人們都恭敬/害怕他呢？

那對兄妹的父親為何要殘害他們？單純因為紅髮？為何一見到吉維安便要對方殺死自己？
5 years agoReply
毛鼠之之
@琉璃異色貓,感謝貓貓提供的建議呀！之後寫番外我在注意一下好了><當初寫這篇可能剛好身體狀況不佳，有些地方就沒注意太多......這篇就先當作一個算失敗的範例文qwq還是謝謝妳喔!!
5 years agoReply
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