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茶粿
我不懂古體詩，想請教一下，如果用“晨”代替春，符合平仄要求嗎？以“晨”對夜，是好還是不好？我的想法是，有時候清晨也會看到月亮的。
1 year agoReply
虛冲
晨的廣東話是第四聲，亦即是平聲字，平仄是符合的。

而晨的確可以直接對應上聯的夜，也是很好的對法。感覺就像是半夜有過驚雷大雨後，早晨就迎來鬱乎蒼蒼，芬芳馥郁的青翠野田。

很好呀！
1 year agoReply
茶粿
@虛冲,謝謝鼓勵！
1 year agoReply
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