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Jackielauu91

兩日訓都無乜點訓由第一章追到live
睇得出比心機肯keep住寫同有進步
加油

9 years agoReply

Yung

作者最喜歡那位後宮，很想知道🌞

9 years agoReply

KinGWL

由高登追到去紙言再到呢到既CD-rom，之前係facebook live 左好耐，但忙得制斷左一段時間, 依加又再live喇

Sad情節寫得幾好，如果描述sad位果陣加返回憶（例如小奧岩岩離開左平凡之後既內心深處感受），咁既離別之苦會更痛👍🏼

9 years agoReply

葉嘉勞

等我諗諗

9 years agoReply

Arthur Ng

新讀者留言
求加速

9 years agoReply

葉嘉勞

sobusy

9 years agoReply

Arthur Ng

加油! 老老豆豆，你文筆真係進步左好多。由第一章唔係好follow 到你講咩，到去到救返美狐的煽情細膩。我覺得你有本事上紙言榜 :) 加油！

9 years agoReply

葉嘉勞

@Arthur Ng,算啦，要日日更先上到紙言榜，對我黎講太難了。留紙言留言總數榜算啦

9 years agoReply

Arthur Ng

@葉嘉勞, Sosad

9 years agoReply

葉嘉勞

@Arthur Ng,睇到你啲留言，諗翻起以前係高登有人話我寫得不知所謂，話我寫到美狐個度寫到想完又唔知點咁。我心諗，從頭到尾我都未諗過咁快完...

9 years agoReply

水靈

其實有時候平凡啲性格真係有啲克人憎…

9 years agoReply

葉嘉勞

殺左佢囉

9 years agoReply

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