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樂天派
本樂的文筆確實還有很多需要改進的地方，不過還是謝謝晨星大評文，另外第二篇的時間線確實發生在記憶浮現之後喔
4 months agoReply
晨星．死神
是記憶之後啊？
沒關係的，文筆本來就是要一練、再練（我也需要）
祝你寫作愉快喲~
感謝參加。
4 months agoReply
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