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Omega-3(秋雁) sponsored 500coins for Issue 62!
太感謝了~ 果然是結構問題嗎？我這方面一直都很弱...
然後收信人的問題是我第一次聽到，我覺得滿有意思的，回去參考參考
日記的話，一開始沒有這樣設定，但越寫其實越有這種感覺，我確實應該多刪減
收到了寶貴的意見呢
6 months agoReply
朝晞Ashinari
結構能力不強的話一開始不要挑戰這種寫法吧🤣
6 months agoReply
Omega-3(秋雁)
@朝晞Ashinari ,試一下試一下www

6 months agoReply
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