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dennis
終於追到live啦，作者你知唔知我足足用了三日時間去追你個故，因為我真係鍾意睇你個故事。一路追一路留意到作者既進步，好似開頭有唔少錯別字/漏字，到你既改善，btw,我相信嚴苛既評論作者應該聽過唔少，我都唔多講。相對見到平凡愈嚟愈強大，我反而更享受平凡係戰爭中透過自身既智慧去取勝。作者透過平凡展現人生與命運既糾結，以及對愛與避愛之間既矛盾，都好打動到我。究竟平凡既結局係點？呢個問題我從來冇去猜度過，我希望透過作者既文字去引導出一個精彩既結局。最後有少少既一個建議，作為一個長篇小說我希望作者可以滲透更加多既含義係你個故事落去，即使係單一既意義上，我亦期望你可以昇華當中既意義或者情懷。因為咁不單可以令讀書反芻思考，令故事玩味成提升。好啦，我亂講左咁耐，我都係時候返去現實，去追逐自己既夢想，共勉之。
11 years agoReply
葉嘉勞
嚴苛嘅評論我好少聽，哈哈，多謝你。我最想見到嘅正係讀者嘅留言。情懷嘅昇華對我黎講太難了。我實做唔到。你講嘅境界我第一時間諗到onepiece, 尾田先係我最尊敬嘅大神。共勉之啦，憑住對小說嘅熱誠。
11 years agoReply
水靈
都係平凡好睇啲，其他小說我根本冇乜點睇，大部分都係紙言睇過
11 years agoReply
葉嘉勞
多謝你啊
11 years agoReply
獨自
只見天矢居高臨下地看著他……
亂左喇……
11 years agoReply
水靈
無呀 你睇錯？
11 years agoReply
seek_wilson
正啊!唔洗瘋狂碌落去仲有更新通知!!
不過今次你篇野短左少少囉
11 years agoReply
葉嘉勞
未搞掂我想試下penana 啲功能姐
11 years agoReply
seek_wilson
我都諗緊你會唔會用呢個借口架啦?
11 years agoReply
葉嘉勞
借r, 你太睇小我啦。偷懶從來唔使借口
11 years agoReply
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