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Comments - 新春嘉年華「獻給馬的N行詩」-皮皮的記憶迴廊VOL.07
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皮皮
ai版的不對仗w
詩最注重韻律，如果唸起來不通順，那就打咩，其他的老大已經發話了ouo(如下
5 months agoReply
祿思Luz
🤭🥰對呀 我還是比較有畫面感的詩意
5 months agoReply
W.H.
AI 版搭咩 (不行)！！

我還是首次看到詩每一句的句尾都同音 (「xiao」)，連聲調都一樣，唸出來，我都快「消」化不良了。

蕭蕭蕭蕭蕭～A.I. 刮颱風？打抽豐？裝蜜蜂？去開封？快發瘋？

我當然比較喜歡真人版啊。
5 months agoReply
祿思Luz
哈哈哈哈 我看到的時候我也覺得好笑 哈哈哈
感謝支持真人版～～
5 months agoReply
W.H.
@祿思Luz,🤜🏻🤛🏻！！
5 months agoReply
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