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Yuki Selune
不好意思工作忙現在才有時間看，非常感謝不眠草大舉辦創挑，也很感謝四位老師的心得，草大的心得讓我有點意外，於是我去仔細看了一下我的文，一看發現！！

我第四章的（下）沒放到啊！
直接（中）然後跳第五章了，真尷尬，對不起草大還反覆多看好幾次，而且那部分已經超過一萬字了讓我更慚愧了，只能再次說聲抱歉！

這故事我也是打算照鈴芽之旅、天氣之子的類型去描寫的，所以場景的描寫會多一點，很感謝這些客觀的意見讓我能好好修改！
7 months agoReply
不眠草
謝謝參與 (๑• . •๑) 記得要補完整版到kado喔~
7 months agoReply
Yuki Selune sponsored 2000coins for Issue 60!
7 months agoReply
不眠草
謝謝打賞~ 
7 months agoReply
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