The story is about teenage love and the usual problems that they suffer and I think you brought it out pretty well. Though I'd like to comment about the characterization ... Liam was easy to grasp as a typical 'jock of the school' but the protagonist and Jordan's characters were a bit vague, if I say so.

The pace of the story was a bit fast and the events were just running one after the other but it was understandable because it's supposed to be a short story!

I conclude by saying that the story was sweet, heartfelt and nicely written! Thanks for participating!