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凝雨
不錯不錯！

P.S. 最後一句打錯主角的名字了
2 years agoReply
樹瑾
寫得很好唷，文句通順易懂！
2 years agoReply
雪鼠子(≧ω≦)/
很感謝你贊我😂，我之前還很糾結如何清晰表達主角和角色互動關係，也很怕太多文戲會失去爽點。
2 years agoReply
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