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想知道後續XD
帶著清新學生感的戀愛故事，我覺得情節和內容敘述方法都挺好的，如果文章裡使用的標點符號在全形與半形的切換可以統一就更適合閱讀囉！這個部分如果可以在今後的寫作中更注意，按照純陽的寫作手法就沒其他什麼大問題可以挑剔了。
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