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Wendy，Dani，Brian
通常歐美名字是這樣的：名字·姓氏，所以文中的人姓氏都跑到前面了(´･Д･)」族與族之間的打鬥蠻吸引人的，關於女主失去丈夫與兒子的部分也令人惋惜( ･᷄ὢ･᷅ )
可惜的是，對話的句號沒有出現，而且分段不多我看的有些吃力ಥ_ಥ
6 years agoReply
十二月
剛剛看分段的確沒有分好，用手機寫小說可能還不太習慣。我有時間用電腦修改。
對話句話真的沒出現，這點我倒是沒發現。
謝謝你的提醒，還有名字我也犯錯了⋯⋯
6 years agoReply
Wendy，Dani，Brian
@十二月,沒關係，之後慢慢修改吧XDD
6 years agoReply
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