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零兒
哪有人比我早放評語的owo(造反？
嗯....跟霧搖說得一樣呢，風格很是特別，解釋出來後意境有些活潑呢，咱倒沒用過這種寫法。
句式方面非常的工整，定是有認真排版過的吧。
7 years agoReply
Minz月月
謝謝鼓勵OWQ
一開始抄錯格律，見笑了(艸
謝謝指正WWWWW
7 years agoReply
霧飄山亭
風格很特別唉！！詞裏不知為何滿有《白露未晞》之感！(詩經中深刻的也只有幾篇，其中一篇便是《白露未晞》)很厲害唉！用字也很是細膩，連出岫也用了！
7 years agoReply
Minz月月
謝謝鼓勵^ ^！
7 years agoReply
零兒
平仄有錯誤，首兩句荻蘆的蘆字是平聲，白字則是入聲仄聲。
7 years agoReply
Minz月月
抄錯題目…馬上改> <
謝謝(つд⊂)
7 years agoReply
Minz月月
已改(呈上
( •̥́ ˍ •̀ )
7 years agoReply
零兒
@月魂伶,不好意思忘了說～～～翳翳沒押到韻owo*
7 years agoReply
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