/comment.php?chapter=6&id=38335
Comments - 為甚麼不能倒退？讓我們回首一次彼此的黑歷史。 | Penana
arrow_back
Comments - 為甚麼不能倒退？讓我們回首一次彼此的黑歷史。
info_outline
format_color_text
toc
comment 0
exposure_plus_1
coins
Search stories, writers or societies
Show More Tags
Continue ReadingClear All
More
What Others Are ReadingRefresh
See more results for ""
X
Never miss what's happening on Penana!
Turn on notifications
Later
Login with Facebook or Sign up/Login to leave a comment.
天照犬神
跟樓下基特評價差不多。其實寫得還可以。雖然是懸疑，但是主角自帶的吐槽屬性，讓整篇故事基調都顯得不算過於沉重。但也有文風和故事內容無法完全契合的不足，可能會導致故事有點四不像之感。綜合來看還是不錯的。
7 years agoReply
不足。字
喔~嚜嚜嚜~謝謝犬神大大指點~(拱手，作揖。也謝謝鼓勵啊~
7 years agoReply
不日的基特
我的夢連貫性也不大，總是會跳場景的。有時候也會夢到玩生存遊戲，刺激極了。有時候會夢到我喜歡的喪屍ヾ(°∀°ゞ)。各種各樣吧~。
其實寫得也不算差，最好的一點是，前面的懸疑設置得非常好，讓讀者很想繼續往下看，跟主角一起想解開「為什麼要逃跑」的這個謎團。
7 years agoReply
不足。字
喔喔喔~謝謝基特鼓勵( ´▽` )ﾉ
((哼啊~夢裡什麼都有可能~😆(之前我媽還夢到有好多的錢啊~~😂😅
7 years agoReply
Back to Story
×
×
Write down what you like about the story
×
Reading Theme:

Font Size:

Line Spacing:

Paragraph Spacing:

Load the next issue automatically


Reset to default

X
×
x
Proceed

x
Before You Publish
Please ensure your story does not contain illegal, hateful, inciting, or violence-promoting content, or any infringing, plagiarized, or spam material, and that it complies with Penana’s Terms of Use.
Penana reserves the right to remove any content that violates these rules or causes legal or community risk, and to suspend or terminate related accounts.
arrow_back
×

Select a reason:

×

Install this webapp for easier offline reading: tap and then Add to home screen.