Anytime guys - I probably have a power complex hahaha It's good fun to read and see how different (and yet in some aspects similar) all of you are. Rivalry FTW! ^_^
I was wondering if you could tell me what befuddled you about my story. There was a lot I wanted to put in here, but I had to cut a bunch to fit the word count. I want to see how I can expand the story.