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猴子李
李克那句 小心點真的釣到我了… 我以為終於要來點溫暖了…結果是更寒冷的提醒…
3 weeks agoReply
沐紫藜
很冷……心超冷……

謝謝大大的分享。
3 weeks agoReply
星野維
我這樣看下來，短句真的很適合大大的故事
1 month agoReply
沐紫藜
謝謝大大，我也覺得《審視》比較適合短句，因為這個故事的壓迫感不是很大聲的那種，而是很輕、很慢，一句一句壓下來。
短句對我來說像停頓，也像呼吸。
能被大大覺得適合這個故事，真的有種被理解的感覺。
4 weeks agoReply
UNO
大大的寫作風格很有特色，除了多為短句，部分段落又有種古典詩詞「對仗」的感覺，是一種融合古典之美和現代寫實的風格。
1 month agoReply
沐紫藜
古代線我有用偏向古典一點的寫法，希望能讓讀者比較明確的感受到現代線與古代線的不同。

謝謝你的回饋❤️
1 month agoReply
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