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大秦書說人
久仰大俠之名
在下對於這個故事沒有多大意見，略有一點指教，故事中有幾處看起來有少字不知閣下是故意為之否？文字過多讀者會因為語感而覺得累贅，反之亦然，如果行間有少子字或者說多幾個字會讀起來更順也會令人發覺
希望蘇某的意見能對閣下有些許幫助
4 months agoReply
霽客
久仰?謬贊了!
不知少字是指何處，很有可能單純是沒寫到?
感謝建議。
4 months agoReply
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