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小魚一尾

@阿禾
4 months agoReply
阿禾
感謝您的心得回饋!其實在遊戲版的時候有輔以圖解做說明(影片版也可以觀看內容，甚至是允許跳過)另外玩家以第一人稱沒有設定名稱和性別其實是故意的，用於配合玩家/讀者的沉浸式體驗
關於小說版的對話寫法，我後續有時間會再來看看能怎麼調整也預祝您新年快樂！
4 months agoReply
小魚一尾
@阿禾,新年快樂～如果是遊戲的話這麼做可能沒問題，但我是以一個不專業的小說讀者身分來閱讀這篇文本，所以這篇作為遊戲可能很適合，小說版本的話可能就需要調整，也祝你寫作順利～
4 months agoReply
阿禾
@小魚一尾,您好,已經將主要人物的對白配合遊戲設定進行染色，並且在一些資訊相關的專有名詞補上一點註解/另外關於周雲成的個性為何會這麼"平靜"，其實原因就放在第五章
4 months agoReply
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