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茶粿
故事很精彩，一口氣讀完！你的文筆真好，用詞很精準，例如「畫面紛至沓來」，很贊！還有，你的知識面很廣，讓人大開眼界，很贊！
不過，有幾個錯別字，本來想建議修改，但考慮到是粵語寫作，那幾個字會不會是粵語的寫法？
7 months agoReply
森林藍天
錯別字，偶然是有的（你指正我會很高興。）。我是個粗心大意的人，尤其是專心在故事時，經常會打錯字。😅


這系列，對話時，刻意用粤語口語，想突出香港文化呈現。不過，偶然都會自己攪亂自己。


7 months agoReply
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