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茗那
✎﹏ 一點簡單的評語外送 ‧⁺ ⊹˚.

女兒的文字充滿愛和溫柔，樸質的日常說得像隨口聊天，最終卻是燒去彼世。
不過就像成了灰的信一樣，這是放下或走過的一種方式，哭過了，總該笑的 ( Ꙭ)⸝ෆ
11 months agoReply
CENPOR
感谢大大的评语 (⁠ ⁠╹⁠▽⁠╹⁠ ⁠)
11 months agoReply
AnFr安鍅
評語：在這一篇裏頭，很好的應用的母親的感謝來帶出思念，以及時光的片刻溫存。把對母親的思念寄託在現實生活中，寫出了一種對見到母親的嚮往，以及惆悵與釋然的掙扎碰撞，是一篇非常動人的文章。
11 months agoReply
CENPOR
感谢大大的评语(⁠◍⁠•⁠ᴗ⁠•⁠◍⁠)
11 months agoReply
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