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貓咪面具 Lina
我是女的啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊QQ

可能是我沒喜歡過男生吧w
綠茶不就是那樣嗎？本人親身經歷。
然後「我好帥」那句沒辦法修，那是伏筆w暗示她的性向……
1 year agoReply
未瑾瀾
是嘛……拍謝啊啊啊啊啊！我還以為……綠茶是那樣的，但我覺得戀愛中的女人不會這麼想靠近對象的女人，普通不會那麼想吧？
1 year agoReply
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