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AnFr安鍅
評語：這篇真的寫得很動人，感覺就像坐在教室裡聽一位朋友講他的故事。開頭的景色描寫超級有畫面感，老槐樹、白鷺、稻浪、陽光斑駁，像夏天特有的靜謐記憶。情感轉折從平靜走入對抗，再帶到決絕和堅持，最後又回到內心的沉澱與無悔，整體很有層次。最讓我印象深刻的是那句「我沒開玩笑」，反覆出現，像一把釘子，把整個故事釘得牢牢的，也釘進人心裡。
11 months agoReply
日堯
謝謝anfr用心的評語🫶🏻（我現在才看到哈哈）
11 months agoReply
AnFr安鍅
@日堯,也謝謝你的參與～
11 months agoReply
茗那
✎﹏ 一點簡單的評語外送 ‧⁺ ⊹˚.

樸實的文字，情感卻十分真實。「我」為了不辜負自己和曾經的承諾而努力成為想要的樣子，實在是閃閃發光得耀眼，非常喜歡且佩服呢。
1 year agoReply
日堯
不負自己真的很值得佩服......
感謝評語！！
1 year agoReply
月穎靈
只要不後悔，任何決定便無對錯～
感謝參加！應該標藍色的部分我問問 @AnFr安鍅看看可不可以……www
1 year agoReply
日堯
好的謝謝🫶🏻
1 year agoReply
AnFr安鍅
小幽靈吶～標藍的部分不用抓的那麼緊的～只要有標出來，那怕留言也行！

最扯的版本是：（請想像它是藍色）
1 year agoReply
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