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猿之勇者學
謝謝雪奈參與!!
應該因為我是女性的關係,
所以寫女性角度會比較容易代入xdd
不過旁邊還是有個茶可以作參考,
希望寫出來會比較寫實不會太離地,
如果說主要男角,
放心就只有Camman跟灰豹xdd
還在讓他們拉鋸中www
每次都很期待聽到讀者說希望誰才是真愛www
我會覺得很有趣xd
魔魔的描寫還要再後一點,
她現在是失去了點東西,
我要幫她找回來,
如果單行本#1是灰豹,
單行本#2就是camman,
單行本#3就是魔魔那樣~
性愛那邊應該就會跟劇情拿個平衡,
各邊專注,
但都不會留力!!!
再次謝謝雪奈的參與!!
1 year agoReply
Setsuna
不會離地啊！感覺挺真實的！
期待之後的發展~
小猿加油！！！
1 year agoReply
猿之勇者學
@Setsuna,
會努力!!!
現在的我沒問題!!!!
1 year agoReply
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