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阿掌
給遠呂智一個讚
2 years agoReply
可能撞名的作家
感謝支持
2 years agoReply
糖呢就兩茶匙
雖然短句是以歌詞形式出現，但也請以以標點符號代替原來空格。第一次出現是「古智城」，後面卻變成了「古志城」？
很多熟悉的人物呢，放在700來字的短篇可能有點太擠擁，另外再續寫下去好像也不錯喔！
謝謝參與，等加上標點符號後會再來點讚🥰
2 years agoReply
可能撞名的作家
感謝閱讀，已修正
2 years agoReply
糖呢就兩茶匙
@可能撞名的作家,嗯……是我說得不清楚，我講的是「痛快的割開 昨日詛咒」中間要加上標點符號呢……如果你覺得不需要標點符號也可以把中間的空格刪去。加上標點符號是我在創挑簡介中已有提及的喔！
2 years agoReply
可能撞名的作家
@糖呢就兩茶匙,沒問題，已修改，感謝
2 years agoReply
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