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眞室邇
願意大修是因爲還不知道怎麽寫，故事在了，精髓還沒有出來，你的故事沒有是不是這種大問題
3 years agoReply
木刻
想不到，自己的感想被點評了🤧

總的來說，願意大修是值得讚許的事吧？我開始有點怕這句說話是有歧義，變成反諷🥺
3 years agoReply
眞室邇
@木刻,我的不是了，別介意字面，好事也是壞事，壞事也是好事
3 years agoReply
木刻
@Tey,明白☺️
3 years agoReply
木刻
序章、第一章看完☺️
3 years agoReply
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