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蝦米餅
我很喜歡你作品的意境，作品的畫面感。（插圖很美）🥰
3 years agoReply
謝謝支持w當然歡迎觀賞《墨青的四點鐘》的劇情啦！或許可以給你更多的新體驗！
3 years agoReply
W.H.
這首詩的音樂性——押韻和節奏——很美。

適合誦讀(不是誇張的那種)。

情感也很細緻，首尾呼應，除了音律外，似乎也有種走不出來的感覺⋯⋯
3 years agoReply
感謝評論
3 years agoReply
W.H.
@雲浪,不客氣^^
3 years agoReply
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