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Comments - 宋爺爺復活節前最後一次創挑，題目：當古代人來到侏儸紀世界 | Penana
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蹦蹦騎士
之前有些走神搞錯了一些部份，重新留言。

李白的要素有些不足，然後李白的認知有些現代。

另外建議稍微檢查一下，有幾個錯字稍微影響到閱讀了。
3 years agoReply
YG FAMILY
好認真🫶🏻補充一下，這文章引用了李白的詩《月下獨酌》，我想樓上的意思是作者在寫李白穿越到侏儸紀世界的情景的同時，亦應要先交代李白的身份與其豐富的想像力（特點？）
3 years agoReply
晴空下的雨
我覺得劇情發展不錯，但是李白的對話感覺太親民了，大概是喝醉酒的關係。
3 years agoReply
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