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這麽一看時空設定方面的交代確實是一個盲點呢，應該要更注意一點。謝謝提醒 >< 黑白的對立也是一個超棒的點，目前“白”的那面確實稍嫌薄弱，主角内心的掙扎張力可以更強呢。下次構想作品的時候會再推敲一下。
你的看法真的很有參考價值，萬分感謝 (≧▽≦)