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余軍
小丑非常可惡😰意有所指的現實殘酷🤔這小說非常有張力及壓迫，有女性主義特色，且手法用上獨幕劇場形式自白告白？👍
3 years agoReply
夏柔
對的~對的~ 簡單說是現實中遇到的各種不如意，夢境用另一種方式持續折磨她

謝謝您對我的作品的稱讚~其實這是去年我參加劇本比賽因為沒有入圍，所以決定寫成短篇小說，但現在再重看一遍，覺得還有地方可以再寫得更好


至於女性主義和獨幕劇場形式自白告白，這兩點我沒有想太多，就只是單純的想說既然是短篇小說，就盡量每一幕都留有重點或伏筆，或是一段有頭有尾的劇情作為結束，在整篇故事的最後再做連貫
3 years agoReply
余軍
@夏柔,我會慢慢看, 又試看日本電影<鬼水凶靈>---不是鬼片而是以女性為中心的悲劇. 顯日本女性地位之低---很有意思XD
3 years agoReply
夏柔
@余軍,好的~我再找時間看這部電影，謝謝推薦 :D
3 years agoReply
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