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Esfandiar C. Hale
I see u went towards the darker parts! I like how you've written the poem! Your style is unique and you've also included repetition in some instances and you've clearly conveyed that while the sun shines onto a beautiful, glimmering ocean, beneath it are deep, dark mysteries humans have not yet discovered. All in all, wonderful job! Thx for the entry :D
SouthernSquid
Thank you so much! I really enjoyed this prompt. Im sorta new at writing, so this support is so nice!
Esfandiar C. Hale
@SouthernSquid, dw I'm new too!
SouthernSquid
@Esfandiar C. Hale, oh good, im not the only newbie 😂
ItsAmelia
I like how you captured the darker side of the ocean! Also, I'm curious, is this person drowning? Should I be concerned?
SouthernSquid
Well ive always been interested in marine biology and how little ae know of the ocean. I kinda went for the darker side, maybe like how the person was drowning in the mystery of it all. But i mean, maybe i should be concerned too 😂
ItsAmelia
@SouthernSquid, yes, get this poor person help! Lol
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