S-Shit. I should not have read this at night. Fuck, fuck, fuck, fuck. . . . Jay were u summoning a demon while writing this coz this is so scary. . . . Shit, one sec lemme go get my teddy bear, this bitch gotta fight off my nightmares tonight :'''')
I'm sorry! It's just a story, I swear! No demon summoning was performed! Honest! XD
I really wished I was allowed to take pictures of this place because it really can be creepy at night. It's a little under a million square feet in size, and the ceiling cranes are massive because they have to be able to lift not only parts but also fully assembled train engines. They are everywhere too. The Paint Line and the offices are really creepy at night too. Even when there are employees working, they are almost never in those two locations. I actually got really creeped out one night because I was used to no one being in the offices, and randomly there was one person there but I couldn't see them. I could only hear the soft music of a radio playing. It was super spooky.
I love the fact that you took your experience from work and turned it into this story. The technical kinda writing reminds me of the clinical style and format of SCP, and it adds so much to the tension. The ambient music adds a lot too
Thank you, Marcelo. I actually love the SCP universe, so a lot of my inspiration came from it as well as from my job. Thanks for reading, and thanks so much for leaving such a nice comment. :)
Thanks so much! I'm super glad you thought it was creepy. This was experimental, so I wasn't sure how it would do. Thanks for leaving a comment. It really means a lot. :)
Yus! That's what I was hoping for. I wasn't sure if I would be able to translate the horror well enough or not. Honestly, because I used my own place of work for reference, this is straight-up nightmare fuel for me. I work alone too, so that's going to be fun when I go back to work. XD
Thanks for reading and commenting. I truly appreciate it. :)
@Jay Ellis, Lol, the last time i heard that refrence was when a guy had an intercourse with the pig. The Gentlemen is the movie. I love your work. I hope to see more of it, and maybe, fingers crossed, we could collab a story one day.
Horror is notmy area of expertise, but you seemed well versed in it. Hope i can learn fromyou.
@Kama Blades, Thank you, Kama. That was an incredibly nice thing to say. You made me smile. However, what thing did I say to remind you of such an... odd... reference? XD
I'm not exactly opposed to doing a collab, I'm just not certain where to even begin with one. I haven't done a collab on a story since I was in high school many years ago. It would have to be something short because I have a fairly busy life schedule, but we can always discuss some possibilities. :)
I really wished I was allowed to take pictures of this place because it really can be creepy at night. It's a little under a million square feet in size, and the ceiling cranes are massive because they have to be able to lift not only parts but also fully assembled train engines. They are everywhere too. The Paint Line and the offices are really creepy at night too. Even when there are employees working, they are almost never in those two locations. I actually got really creeped out one night because I was used to no one being in the offices, and randomly there was one person there but I couldn't see them. I could only hear the soft music of a radio playing. It was super spooky.
... I genuinely got kind of scared.
Thanks for reading and commenting. I truly appreciate it. :)
Horror is notmy area of expertise, but you seemed well versed in it. Hope i can learn fromyou.
I'm not exactly opposed to doing a collab, I'm just not certain where to even begin with one. I haven't done a collab on a story since I was in high school many years ago. It would have to be something short because I have a fairly busy life schedule, but we can always discuss some possibilities. :)