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Coen Wonder

I enjoyed reading your story. It is well paced and the dialogues are very intact. I liked how your dialogues - although they seemed like daily conversations - created some kind of suspense throughout the story. I will wait to find out why Kenny is leaving her!:)
Btw, actually I wasn't sure about the part where Eru made Beth upset. What did Eru actually do? I am not sure if you have mentioned it in the story.
Carry on!

10 years agoReply

Aretice N. Treader

Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it.

That part of the story isn't going to be a huge part of Tremors, to be honest, because it happened during Ken's arc, but I do plan on looking at it more in Tremble (haha, somewhat shameless self-promotion).

»Slight spoiler alert: It has to do with Tommy. (I feel like I gave it all away, pretty much, but ah well.)

10 years agoReply

Aretice N. Treader

I'm so sorry; I forgot to ask! Is there anything specific you think I can improve on? I need all the help I can get, so any and all feedback is much appreciated. :)

10 years agoReply

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