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北海沙丁魚
精彩精彩🥳幸好菲妮絲沒死
2 weeks agoReply
景曦
對讀者來說，紅光可能太突兀，始終前面沒多提及。
2 weeks agoReply
北海沙丁魚
@景曦,感覺前面可以埋個被窺視的伏筆什麼的？比較明顯的那種
1 week agoReply
CF LAM
菲妮絲是如何復活的? 紅龍嗎?
2 weeks agoReply
景曦
這是終極大伏筆，我糾結了很久要不要就讓龍族救了她就算
這部分我承認處理得有點差，前面有提及不過真的不明顯，現在著手加入更多紅光的伏筆在前面，讓這看起來不是作者復活術。
不過紅光的真相在第三部/第四部才會揭曉
2 weeks agoReply
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