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幻鈊
首先在這裡先謝謝南末大大的心得~願意看完是對我很大的鼓勵！


還有就是10歲小孩應該是裡面另一個角色，不是男主角，這方面可能是我敘述的問題，我會改善的！

能看到南末大大對我的小說設定沒有太大的意見也讓我很開心，這代表我的心思沒有白費

最後再謝謝一次，謝謝你願意撥出時間來看完我這個新手寫的文，還打了這麼長的文章！

抱歉最近比較忙，都是上網站設定個自動更新就下線了，沒看到這篇
1 year agoReply
是南末吶！
原來是另一個人，還以為都在說主角🫣🫣

我覺得設定很有趣，能修改一下句子什麼的，會更好～

沒事～
1 year agoReply
是南末吶！
@幻鈊, 汕頭牛肉火鍋來了
1 year agoReply
可鹹甜
南末好用心@@

還打那麼多字@@

還是有複製的方法@@?
1 year agoReply
是南末吶！
@可鹹甜, 沒有，是用肉體是打的xddd
1 year agoReply
可鹹甜
@是南末吶！,真好...有肉體...咦!?
1 year agoReply
是南末吶！
@可鹹甜, 找了個肉體附身，才能打字
1 year agoReply
DUCE
@是南末吶！,青春欸肉體
1 year agoReply
是南末吶！
@DUCE, 不是xdddddd
1 year agoReply
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