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Ethel was definitely my favorite character so far. I also really liked the opening with Hero Tia and the recruitment commercial it was a great way to introduce the world. The ending with the emergency alert on 26th Street was a nice cliffhanger that made me want to read the next chapter. Overall, I really enjoyed it.
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