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子不語
看完從高光的地方到最新進度。

感覺還沒有很多的角色專屬劇情，因為才剛出任務報告的場景，危機才剛發生（墜機，被敵軍包圍），凱特除了賣萌之外，就是跟男主角告白自己用了道具博取大家好感。

還需要許多事件與互動來豐富人物的設定，讓讀者認識。

加油啊！
2 days agoReply
大明
我會腦力的._.
2 days agoReply
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