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樂祈
謝謝大大的創作挑戰！很開心我的作品能被欣賞🥰
以前很容易在前幾章就塞下一堆設定，但漸漸都改成在對話或故事推進時才講一些。
大大的創作會在慢慢追上進度，故事也很有趣🥹👍
7 months agoReply
楠都月
我覺得設定上可以慢慢展開，但也有作者的習慣是在開章展開很多設定，其實也是看大家的習慣，如何處理會比較妥當。
7 months agoReply
沈昀
感謝楠都月大大舉辦創挑！作品能被喜歡真的受寵若驚💜
7 months agoReply
楠都月
因為老師的作品很有趣！會繼續閱讀下去的
7 months agoReply
陽壽木魚
感謝舉辦~~
7 months agoReply
子不語 sponsored 1000coins for Issue 58!
感謝舉辦創挑！超開心你覺得男女主角的關係很有趣，感謝閱讀！！！
7 months agoReply
楠都月
謝謝打賞～我會繼續閱讀老師的作品的😉期待後來男女主角的火花！
7 months agoReply
孤蒼寰
我覺得現在要寫一本吸引的小說真的很難呢
節奏又要快，否則讀者會失去耐性。
但展開又不能太急，否則讀者又來不及消化
兩者平衡不好抓。
7 months agoReply
楠都月
我也覺得🤧🤧🤧，自己寫小說也會注意這一點，看能不能抓到平衡，令小說吸引到讀者之餘，也不會讓故事節奏過急。
7 months agoReply
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