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夜臨 Yalin Hayami
原來政府的戰防部是擺在這邊介紹啊，放在前面章節提前介紹其實會比較好。
1 month agoReply
蘿蔔大學長
對於將戰防部的引進放在哪邊有什麼建議嗎？目前好像不太知道要放哪邊😭
1 month agoReply
夜臨 Yalin Hayami
@蘿蔔大學長,開場，次郎視角時都可以放呀。不過你那是很久以前寫的，可能就是修稿時調整放入。

另外一個切入點是阿明入學時，次郎帶他導覽學院之類的。導覽學院也就能順便提到跟戰防部的關係。
1 month agoReply
蘿蔔大學長
@夜臨 Yalin Hayami, 好主意！
1 month agoReply
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