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VIA
老實說每次修稿我都是每句都在看和修改，雖然沒有物理紅字但其實做的就差不多（

經驗上我寫初稿不修是不能見人的，在PNN先行放出就是想看有沒有回饋，在修稿時一拼思考節省一點時間，畢竟比賽稿有截稿日限制。

本來是想修個三次，但時間關係目前只修了兩次（相隔時間太短效果也有限）……等比賽結束放涼後，哪天有心情或許會再修個一次吧？

先感謝個書評。
1 year agoReply
夜臨 Yalin Hayami
不客氣喔～

修三次實在非常用心，但也要記得寫別部的續集啊ｗ
1 year agoReply
VIA
@夜臨, 佛系等待寫作能量自然補充（
1 year agoReply
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