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芝沫
Daenerys和Blade好可愛，她害羞了！
多點比賽時的環境和心理描寫能提升故事的緊張感

好奇Ripslinge的好勝心從何而來～
4 years agoReply
勝雲
不是好勝心，而是執著。
在Daenerys 之前，Ripslinge 是連三屆世界冠軍。但暗地裡做了一些壞事，直到Daenerys 打敗他並揭發出來
4 years agoReply
芝沫
@Tiffany , 原來他是黑幕
4 years agoReply
勝雲
@芝沫,然後欺騙他的姪子（後段故事Shotterstar 會洗白）
4 years agoReply
勝雲
@芝沫,但代價有點高
4 years agoReply
芝沫
@Tiffany , 期待劇情的走向
4 years agoReply
勝雲
@芝沫,謝謝
4 years agoReply
勝雲
Shotterstar 在空中輕觸Daenerys 的機翼，促使Daenerys 偏離路線。結果她發現了一個森林火災，她的消防員身份被曝光。
4 years agoReply
芝沫
可以試試在她發現森林火災前加點鋪墊
4 years agoReply
勝雲
@芝沫,下章會補充，謝謝。
4 years agoReply
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