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對酒當歌
感謝大大的意見~~
其實我已經改了數次，奈何功力真的不足😣
語感方面讓我再琢磨琢磨
大約一百章後應該會有好一點點🤣
再次感激大大抽空觀看~~
4 months agoReply
Omega-3(秋雁)
加油~
4 months agoReply
Omega-3(秋雁)
@對酒當歌
4 months agoReply
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