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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
是異地的奶茶味道，整體故事吸引，也不用太多讚賞的說話。我倒是有興趣，如果作者能夠用英式奶茶借喻比較，突顯港式英式，甚至之後有更多不同國家的口味來分別，會令故事的層次更豐富~~
6 years agoReply
Setsuna
也許之後會做的，始終主角一開始喝的就是港式奶茶，未有空間做到不同奶茶之間的對比
而且故事的重點也不是在各國奶茶的分別XD
6 years agoReply
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