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Endlessly
其實我真的覺得還好，看妳的小說比較放鬆一點，就只是看著主角們既平淡卻又激情（？）的生活。
我唯一的建議，就只有建議把「性」刪去一點點，這點而已。其實我覺得其他都還不錯，有很多萌點、甜蜜的地方還有很多笑點，對我而言，其實很不錯。
3 years agoReply
咖洨
瞭解了，我會在做調整
3 years agoReply
Endlessly
@錢飛飛,嗯，加油！！
3 years agoReply
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