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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
啊~~~應該正要開動就斷了嗎！

假如可以將一開始的事件集中一點來說可能會更清晰... ...現在感覺上姜子牙有點留於表面，我還在想他是什麼年紀、能力、個性應該是口才不錯，腦筋靈活的人。

以影像方式來表達的話，觀眾可以看得清楚，但純文字的話可能需要自行補腦(我未投入到角色之中)。不過，當我以為有這是個問題時，見大家的留言又沒有不適當的情況出現。這一點，令我理解更多大家看故事的習慣及要求~~
6 years agoReply
mynameisMY
謝謝thirteenman的留言🤣👏💕💃🏻 我以爲斷在懸念位可以吸引讀者惹🙈🙈哎呀 失算失算～不過沒關係！有生之年系列以後還有很大的修改/進步空間！再次感謝13兄辦的創挑👏

6 years agoReply
十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
@mynameisMY,

加油！^O^！正準備做啲好無聊嘅挑戰~~一星期快閃~~有興趣就玩~~
6 years agoReply
生若虎
倒霉天師最終變成幸運天師了🥰是靈異故事耶支持～
6 years agoReply
mynameisMY
謝謝虎兄ก็ʕ•͡ᴥ•ʔ ก้
6 years agoReply
Wendy，Dani，Brian
天！好看XDDD
MY文筆好棒！想看全文٩(๑òωó๑)۶
6 years agoReply
mynameisMY
抱住溫蒂😭💕 滾動！
6 years agoReply
欠我一粒甘栗
好看 (ฅ´ω`ฅ)
要再表白MY喵的文筆！
6 years agoReply
mynameisMY
嚶～摸摸小甘栗！好久沒吃你了wwww
謝謝小甘栗💕💕🙈
6 years agoReply
欠我一粒甘栗
@mynameisMY,是喔~好久沒被吃了XD (不
我要預約位置等更新！！！(ฅ´ω`ฅ)
6 years agoReply
露娜仙仙
想看姜子!!!
6 years agoReply
mynameisMY
（抱住蹭💕
6 years agoReply
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