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漫予
感謝Waitthk的參與！（你的聯想我不太了解，查詢『左』的字義大概是『已經』的意思，如果不準確歡迎解釋～）

　這組其實很像一種「被困住」的心境描寫，你寫的那些物件，全都已經壞掉或失效了，鑰匙掉了、書本翻過卻沒用、鏡子爛掉、杯子乾掉、窗戶也鎖上了。

　這種設定就像是身處一個怎麼努力都出不去的空間，讓人一直在問「我什麼時候才能出去？」背後透出的感覺，就是一種無力又無奈的掙扎。
9 months agoReply
Waitthk
對耶， 大概是 「了」 的意思， 後來我覺得我還有字數可以加句 

門外好像有聲音！ 

這讓就有希望了！
9 months agoReply
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