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技工尼爾
沒有關連，但聯想起周禮茂《破曉》用了很多「了」字。
「遺棄的聲音又響起了」
「天亦天天的了，地天天的了」
「似了似了不了地了」
「某月某日某宵我倦了」
2 years agoReply
任夢飛 Remy Flynn
😂其實靈感是來自另一首～任然的《一步之遙》，還有粵語版的，副歌充滿疊字
2 years agoReply
技工尼爾
@弄墨,若論疊字，最經典是李清照「尋尋覓覓，冷冷清清，悽悽慘慘戚戚。」但鼻祖可能是《詩經》😅
2 years agoReply
任夢飛 Remy Flynn
@技工尼爾, 桃之夭夭灼灼其華😛
2 years agoReply
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