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凶讀
這是一本很有趣的青少年讀物，裡面充滿淡淡的親情(姊妹)與友情。
整體環境氣氛的塑造很棒。
很魔幻，有一種獨特的魔法浪漫。
3 years agoReply
木靈
謝謝凶讀的支持和心得！第一人稱和角色處理的部分的確有改進空間，我會嘗試調整，謝謝你的意見❤
3 years agoReply
凶讀
@木靈,感謝您帶領讀者進行一次很棒的魔幻體驗！
3 years agoReply
木靈
@凶讀,也謝謝你的喜歡😆
3 years agoReply
凶讀
@木靈,不客氣XD別再謝啦~
3 years agoReply
凶讀 sponsored 100coins for Issue 52!
3 years agoReply
木靈
感謝打賞！
3 years agoReply
晴空下的雨 sponsored 100coins for Issue 52!
加油，等你的第二部作品!
3 years agoReply
木靈
感謝希言的打賞和支持！很感動～
3 years agoReply
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